Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Short story conclusion

Author's Note: This is me conclusion for my short story. I think it is a good conclusion. Please comment on my transitions.

Frank moved his small cheese business to Wisconsin with hope of more customers. The cheese was delivered faster and was less expensive. Eventually more customers came. Soon, a new building began its construction across the street. Frank wondered what it was. Then, a sign was put up . It read: "Bill's Cheese Shack Coming Soon."

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