Thursday, October 6, 2011

Short story hook

Owning a cheese business can be hard work. Especially when you have too much cheese and not enough customers. This problem could arise if your cheese castle is in England because Wisconsin is the cheese state. This is Frank the munchkin's problem.

3 comments:

  1. I liked it and you are the only one to say that he was a munchkin. :)

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  2. I like your creative statements.

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  3. This has a nice start, but I think there could be more. Consider why too much cheese in England might be such a problem for Frank. How might you turn this problem into a hook that would leave a reader asking, "what happens next?"

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