When you increase your knowledge, you see how little you know. You see how much you still have to learn. When you know a lot, you can say: "I know that I know nothing."
Owning a cheese business can be hard work. Especially when you have too much cheese and not enough customers. This problem could arise if your cheese castle is in England because Wisconsin is the cheese state.This is Frank the munchkin's problem.
This has a nice start, but I think there could be more. Consider why too much cheese in England might be such a problem for Frank. How might you turn this problem into a hook that would leave a reader asking, "what happens next?"
I liked it and you are the only one to say that he was a munchkin. :)
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ReplyDeleteThis has a nice start, but I think there could be more. Consider why too much cheese in England might be such a problem for Frank. How might you turn this problem into a hook that would leave a reader asking, "what happens next?"
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