At the very
beginning of Give Me Liberty,
Nathaniel has a problem. His owner is going bankrupt so he's selling all of his
slaves, servants, horses, everything. Nathaniel is going to be bought by a
blacksmith named Mr. Owen. A selfish, mean, blacksmith. He's already hit
Nathaniel and he hasn't even bought him yet. Owen wants Nathaniel to pick out a
horse. Nathaniel decides to have a little fun. He picks a wild horse. When Owen
sees the horse, the horse leans forward and kicks Owen with her back legs. Owen
lands a few feet back. The horse turns around a rears up and stomps down a few
times trying to hit the rolling Owen. Soon the horse runs off and Nathaniel
chases after.
Instead of being
bought by that mean blacksmith, Nathaniel is saved. After getting the horse
under control, Nathaniel gets beat by Owen. Owen's first blow hits Nathaniel
right in the right eye. The second, his lip. On the third Nathaniel used his
hands to block. Then Owen switched to pounding his back. The man in the
carriage, with a horse, that Vixen, Nathaniel's horse, had messed with, came
yelling at Owen. He was telling Owen to stop beating Nathaniel. Soon he bought
Nathaniel from the auctioneer. Owen gave him up saying that Nathaniel would rob
him in his sleep. Nathaniel thought that would not be true. Later, that
prophecy will be fulfilled.
This reads as a summary instead of an analysis of cause and effect. Revise and be very clear about the event you are examining and the effects of that event.
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